tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6184599977942883128.post6744230396110384578..comments2023-06-24T14:41:09.905+01:00Comments on Karolina Urlikyte — CAA, UCA Rochester: "From Script to Screen" | StoryKarolina Urlikytehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/06813497175329977782noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6184599977942883128.post-6383467295474493722017-02-06T22:16:38.753+00:002017-02-06T22:16:38.753+00:00agreed, you don't need to explain the bully...agreed, you don't need to explain the bully's kite - he just 'has one' - and yes, he's the kind of kid who just gets what he wants.tutorphilhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11842833126210822641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6184599977942883128.post-59025862132415605872017-02-03T12:33:23.702+00:002017-02-03T12:33:23.702+00:00I'm kinda left thinking about the background o...I'm kinda left thinking about the background of our protagonist, and whether he is really a reject or just someone who is solitary. Having a solid foundation for motivation in the main character means a lot in a story like this where the drive is the will to teach the bullies a lesson. After all why would he bother doing anything if he is already an outcast?<br /><br />I imagine some kind of Dexter's lab scenario in this case, with the comedic backdrop working to your advantage. At least that's how I'd go around it.<br /><br />Hope this helps develop your story.Dragooner19https://www.blogger.com/profile/15733151893781719597noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6184599977942883128.post-26935052863980014132017-02-03T10:28:15.182+00:002017-02-03T10:28:15.182+00:00I don't think that I need to explain that part...I don't think that I need to explain that part. It's about the little boy and he needs. <br />The part when the bully comes with kite, can mean that bully's parents are rich so that's why he got fancy looking kite.Karolina Urlikytehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06813497175329977782noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6184599977942883128.post-24698346208669819872017-02-03T06:02:17.691+00:002017-02-03T06:02:17.691+00:00Nice!I love the last part where sketchbook shows u...Nice!I love the last part where sketchbook shows us all his work in progress. It would be a very good shot!<br />Also I wonder how this bully even managed to create a kite to begin with...AnastasijaStrelcovahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12792505018633509706noreply@blogger.com